sweet
sounds good. explicit's flow doesn't really fight the track, a little mumbled and quick. still good though. kellz always comin hard wit lines. need to collab soon.
AO
sweet
sounds good. explicit's flow doesn't really fight the track, a little mumbled and quick. still good though. kellz always comin hard wit lines. need to collab soon.
AO
good song
nice flow, excellent beat, nice video by the way, i like the higher pitched voice accompanied by yours. real good. love the gangsta shit. overall 5/5 10/10, real good stuff.
collab soon?
good
i liked it, good rhymes, swollen drumz always makin hot beats. i really liked the message. loved the last line, "now you dont even have 9 feet to yourself", sick shit. keep it up
-Obie
kids done
man he shouldnt even record. he couldnt touch you as much as hed like to. you seriously dropped "knowlede" on that kid. good work
nice
good song, not your best on delivery though, i liked the beat though, spontane does some good stuff, i liked the lead in to the chorus, good message and progression. i would have liked to see the last chorus a combination of the first two, i think that would have been a nice finishing touch. keep it up kellz
side note*
foreigners will do shit for dirt cheap, and sweat shops actually boost the economy because the major componies who have them pay like nothing but twice as much as those kids or people who work there will make anyway. which keeps them off the streets, and when it comes back to us we buy it quintuple the price made which builds up the stock market which benefits us all.
nice
i like the feel, some pads would be hot, good rapping beat, def add verb to the drums. sounds good.
Thanks. ;o
All of yah' encouraged me for this, lol
I thought it was something ordinary, but I could sort of hear the pads and such makin' it a masterpiece.
- MPZ
this beat
is hot man, really good progression, great piano, i like the sample also. you did work on this beat im suprised you couldnt sell it. great stuff, keep it up!
obie
Im surprised to, but if you hear what my bruddahs usually bang to you'll understand, bless for the love fam, just stay tuned coz theres more to come, peace.
you win
hands and feet down.
haha, thanks man.
did i hear...
shitty cock? reverse it quick cockshitties b-clit h-one and fcd in the place to be? oh shit. djdanger nice flow on this
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